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Twisted Rapunzel

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Really needs comments for suggestion and improvement.

This is Rapunzel who has had enough, she climbed down with her own hair, stabbed the witch who imprisoned her then starting chopping off her damned hair!

Should I keep the borders? Or change it to something else? Keep the dark gradient showing her demise?

Help please!

Will add any stocks used later.

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Veniae's avatar
Wow. I love the way you've drawn the characters, their hairs look awesome!

The only critique I could give you is that probably the witch wouldn't stay upright and stare into the viewer after she's been stabbed, it's a bit stiff. And the blood on the knife looks really thick.